Busted up on
the out side
but still home
within.
A contest entry
- 13 Words Only for this Picture XII by Manda Kathryn.
300 points, ended October 3, 2008, 33 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Interesting write. Definitely thought provoking. I'm trying to figure out where exactly you were going here. Is it a person who has fallen into a rough situation, but is too "at home" to dig himself out? Something else? I'd love to hear if you'd be willing to clear it up for me.
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well what can i say, you say so much with so little, that takes skill, and insight
bravo
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Wonderful Words.
Hello son, I think many can relate to these few words you have penned. so nicely. Great write and congratulations to you for the honorable mention. Take care,
Hugs, Mum
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James-these few words summed up a whole lot. I am pleased this gem was appreciated!! take care poet x peace
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13 words that speaks volumes
Brilliant take on the picture prompt
Take care
CHEERS
David
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ooh, those few words decribe the house so well! I love this!
Best of luck ^_^
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