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Autumns Spirit (Haiku)

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night-sky's orange glow
ghost in waterfalls mist
autumns harvest moon 

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  • i like this one a lot. it almost sent shivers down my spine. the image you have crafted here is superb. great job and good luck in the contest!


  • DogFish silver member
    April 19
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    ...very evokative! (a great photo!...but I like the haiku even better!)


  • aboomer silver member
    November 9, 2008

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    Even though this does have a trophy (and I'd prefer a write that didn't), this is lovely! I really adore your 2nd line!
    'ghost in waterfalls mist'.....beautiful.

    Thank you for this lovely entry. Best wishes in the contest.


  • Luna Tique Fringe
    November 5, 2008
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    nice


  • LadyDementia gold member
    November 4, 2008

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    Congrats on the HM!

    You have painted a wonderful picture, portraying some beautiful imagery, the pic is like a cherry on top. Very neat form, good luck and congrats on the HM


  • dustytiger
    November 4, 2008
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    just beautiful


  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    October 12, 2008

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    This is realy good hard to decide which was the best the senery or the poem .
    I liked your poem very much. Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.
    ED.


  • Swan song gold member
    October 5, 2008
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    Very beautiful!!!!! excellent imagery and what a pic!


  • Rovingone gold member
    September 21, 2008

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    I can certainly see the skeleton of that ghost in the lightening strike. God depiction, you captured the picture perfectly.

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