He placed flowers in my hair paying homage to my skin
that shone with joy and love treasured in my heart for him,
liquid eyes that ebb and flow I will gladly drown within
take me far beyond this time let the water boil and brim.
I smelt cedarwood and spice, tasted passionfruit so rare,
drowned in the azure sea where I melted in his hands,
crystal rainbow water ran from his mane of flowing hair
as he wrapped me in his dreams floating off to other lands.
Lips of fire and tongue like ice marking secret places kept,
skin that sizzles and then tingles swept upto a dizzy height,
never waking from this heaven where my fantasies have slept,
moonsoaked pillows hold the essence of the oh so sacred night.
Kisses soft as cottonwool feathered gently on my breast,
dying with each tender touch praying I will not awake,
breath like molton oil ignites as cool winds blow from the west,
I am like a fragile flower as each petal he will take.
Sensual oils invade the air, jasmine petals touching skin
that shone with joy and love treasured in my heart for him,
insense burns above my head as he takes me from within,
let me drown into this love as the waters boil and brim.
A contest entry
- Oh... sooooo Sensual Please! by delightfulmess.
450 points, ended September 21, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is just beautiful, takes your reader on a beautiful sensual journey.
Congrats on the HM
~sugar~
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Oh so very sensual and beautifully worded.
Outstanding, Thank you for entering my contest.
Delila
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Ooooo ... this is very sensual, love it
All the best in the contest
Love
Suz
xxxx
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tenderly sensual
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