Classy lady hiding from the world
Embraced by the roughness of pearls
Softness of fur felled by hardness of heart
Floating away
A dream, a dream
Inside a pauper, left to feel
Love for it all
Oh how the innocent mind embraces
The joys of a wealthy fulfilling life
She smiles, she smiles
A little girl dreams, away the eve
Awaiting the life that is to come
Who only know’s,
Who can see? for;
it comes, it comes.
Author notes
Picture credited to
EARLS by =manips-of-artist2
A contest entry
- Pretty Picture Prompt # 20 (contest) by LadyDementia.
600 points, ended September 25, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - *~* Enter And You Wont Regret! Many Options *~* by Shannon62875.
320 points, ended October 14, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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wow... this isnt quite what i was looking for.. im really sorry... I dont feel like i quite understand these kind of writes... Keep up the great work though im sure it is really good!
Shannon*Leah -
This is very well written, its got that beautiful flow to it and a lovely echo wich gives it a dream like feel. cleverly done
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Beautifully done, wouldn't it be good if dreams did come true, or if we could see our future paths in life. Awesome take, good luck
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A very sweet tale! It's nice to think that dreams might be able to come true!!
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wow
so cool -
The title sits well against the tenderness of the picture prompt Very nicely constructed. A good use of repetition All the best in this contest.
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i like this poem, it rests lightly on the mind. its very elegant, and no line seems out of place.
"Softness of fur felled by hardness of heart
Floating away
A dream, a dream" - i like this line for a thousand reasons. great write
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