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Technicolor Dreams



To dream in technicolor of a soft and sensuous kiss
  The breath of love on breasts so soft and white
To sleep on waves of pleasure in an avalanche of bliss
  To smile and know you're needed through the night
When love has gripped your senses and your mind can float away
There's nothing recompenses like a dream to end your day

The scenes of Mother Nature float around inside your head
  As lips and skin are joined in harmony
A soft erotic rhythm as you sleep inside your bed
  The music of a perfect symphony
When love is all you're dreaming and your dreams are underway
You body's always scheming for this way to end the day

You smell the scent of roses as the petals slowly part
  You peek inside the passion of the hour
A congress of the willing and the act of love can start
  The humming bird is visiting the flower
When love has bloomed forever and you know it's there to stay
There isn't any finer dream to end a busy day

Beneath the covers of your bed your body knows it all
  The way that relaxation has to grow
Inside the dreams that fill your head you're answering the call
  The dreams have many pleasures still to show
The dream is just a promise of the prizes life can pay
And love is just fulfillment of each promise every day

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  • Thomas Scott gold member
    September 23, 2008
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    congrats on the prize


  • moonbumps silver member
    September 22, 2008
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    Well done the Bronze-I knew you would do well Jeffkins-
    Bumpy xxx

  • CandaceVaughn
    September 21, 2008
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    Well very impressive piece here Mr.Green. Sure Ms. Passions will adore this one.
    And a shiny bronze, well worth more.

    CVaughn

  • CandaceVaughn
    September 21, 2008

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    Well very impressive piece here Mr.Green. Sure Ms. Passions will adore this one.
    And a shiny bronze, well worth more.

    CVaughn


  • delightfulmess silver member
    September 21, 2008

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    So very lovely.
    It is like sweet music.
    Thank you for entering my contest.


    Delila

  • moonbumps silver member
    September 21, 2008
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    Must try this hotel out!!!
    Blissful-
    Bumpy


  • Amera gold member
    September 21, 2008

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    This poem is very pretty and flows past my lips as the mist on a meadow on a new spring day with smells and color delight.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    September 21, 2008

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    What, you couldn't sustain the intellectual excitement?

    OK, this is Greenian. hop hop hop.

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