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Emptiness

Hidden shame envelopes
Solid as a stone
Abandonment alone
People once cherished
Gone

A contest entry

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  • dustookie2
    September 22, 2008

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    oh this is an excellent take on the prompt picture.You have painted much in the picture of words. Where once voices rang out now as you say 'gone'. Good luck in the contest.