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Earths bosom

Missing image
black soil
begets green grass
pigment uniform

earth bosom
infinite occur
fertile eternal

roots suck
earth nipples
pump nutrition

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Haiku

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  • Swan song gold member
    October 5, 2008
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    A little rough even a haiku has a flow but you have the idea i think thank you for entering

  • ashjoe76
    September 21, 2008

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    brilliant work. the flow is superb.

    earth bosom
    infinite occur
    fertile eternal

    roots suck
    earth nipples
    pump nutrition

    great. keep it up.


  • ZachP silver member
    September 21, 2008
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    nicely done good luck in the contest.
    Zach