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Eyes Closed Hands Locked

I often see people holding hands at the park
Passionately showing affection and love

I closed my eyes and wished for you to be by my side
Without fail you came and locked your hands with mine

I opened my eyes so I can look at your face
Then, I realized I'm only dreaming, what a disgrace

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  • sense surreal
    September 29, 2008

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    lol on PDA and our wishful longings for someone we want to be intimate with...

    I like your ending...what a disgrace...
    admittedly I am like this too...wishing ugh blame my Ilusyonada Syndrome lol