Remembering
a lazy smile
dimple showing briefly
as you wiped me away
laughed
when you realised
I needed more
that's what I hear
A contest entry
- 1:01 a.m. by Cinnarry.
8750 points, ended October 10, 2008, 20 entries
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Welcome back to your muse!
And with such a splash! (Ooops...was that an unintentional pun?
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Good to see you around and productive. Keep 'em coming! (Ooops)
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whoa... how i missed your writing... good to have you back. this one was quite intense to come back with...
indeed, it was.
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Very clever! Leaves the reader with many things wondering around in the head. You know which head I speak of, correct? LOL I like this, and love the brevity Mr. C. Great job! Good luck!
Reneé
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jesus h corbett mr c
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good to see you
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A spectacular return to form, I love it.
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omfg. my heart just hurt...
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