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autumn (modern haiku)






autumn morning -
against the pumpkin
my pregnant belly




late night show
a bat swoops down 
the harvest moon




fall shower
on my window
a rainbow














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  • Draig aine gold member
    January 25
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    ah gee

    perfect


  • Swan song gold member
    October 5, 2008
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    autumn morning -
    against the pumpkin
    my pregnant belly

    this it me is haiku Thank you so much


  • azure85 gold member
    September 21, 2008

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    A loely trio of haiku for the season, I really like the first alot. The second with image of the bat, oh that sets the season! And the beauty of the third, just lovely.