the past tells the future
the past cells the future
the vast quell the butcher
the cast heals the suture
traveling ajar
omnipresent to the distant stars
here you are
comet czar
commit scars
conquer all
the quickening awakening
is happening
the shaping
shaking temporal foundations
anomalous war
defiant
dependent upon us to exist
time to unhinge and perplex the perspective
paradoxically preying
upon the proxy politician
squishing illicit dreams real quick
all of the profits we tax it
no hood over our heads the fact is this
you ain't got shit son have at thee
fractal liens fracturing your life into disparate scenes
prosperously despairing queens of industry crying for mercy
indiginous karmic retribution
A contest entry
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Comments
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I love the flow of this one, not my favorite of yours but it has one of the best flows.
it is very strong, and the pictures it brings to mind are quite breath taking.
great write.
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you ain't got shit son have at thee
Hee I liked that line. I loved how it was a serious message witrh a comical twist to it. -
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im glad you found it funny.
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although i'm not a fan of this style, I can respect it, especially when done well, the jumping rhyme, or rhyme in general, irritates me but you always make up for it with some fresh intuitive imagery and unorthodox phrasing, also word play is top notch
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