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#7 Her Damage, my essence and why I am always there.

It is she
the one who holds my essence
within her tiny hands.

You see
only one such as she,
damaged by life,
can hold my essence.

Looking at her
you see innocence
but that is only on the outside.
Her beauty
is only skin deep.
It does not touch her Soul.

I, however
know this person
as no one else does.

I feel her hands upon me.
Caressing me
protecting me
loving me.

I know what she wants,
what she feels,
what she needs.
It's me.

However, as you can see
I am trapped
trapped within this sphere
and she
she is damaged goods.

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  • maralisa silver member
    September 28, 2008
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    a great take onthe promt I could feel your deep wanting emotions good luck in the contest


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    September 21, 2008
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    Good take on the prompt