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Imagine

My fingers tip-toe up your chest,
your hand slides down my back.

That sensation—
yes, that feeling of utter surrender—
will overcome me,
will overcome you.

Can you imagine?

My back will arch,
and you will rise,
but I will tease.

My lips drag across your neck,
My teeth nibbled your tender flesh.

I know you imagine.

Make your move, take what I
want to give.

Forget what they might think,
only remember what you crave.

You want me.
I don’t wish it.
I know it.

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This was a quicky
Oh, dear, that can be taken in a couple ways.

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  • zochit2me gold member
    September 21, 2008

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    This is seductive in a young and vulnerable kind of way.
    Almost over confident at the end.
    But well constructed and formatted.
    Sheltered will love it...

    ♥Becky♥


  • sheltered
    September 21, 2008
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    Very seductive.
    I imagine that I look
    like a basset hound in heat
    about now.


  • Chocolate Dime
    September 21, 2008
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    HAHA I love the author note! Wooo I just had a very violent sneeze. Ech.