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Ember

Listen to this song of mine

these silent words i sing

listen to this broken heart

the world you shattered at it’s seam

In the quiet night I’m crying

seeing your face in shadow high

in this shattered twilight calling

praying for you to be by my side

Listen to my song this morning

this requeim for the dead

listen to my tear drops falling

raining down upon your head

In the past I saw your shadow

the puff of death in breath

and cried alone knowing future

that one day it would end

Listen to my lonely tune

this shadow of a song

hear the heart you tore in two

and know that you were wrong

your waxen in your coffin

smile out of reach

your cold in lonely twilight

beyond my mightiest feats

that ember of the murder

still warm along your lips

shakes me to my core

breaks my heart to bits

Author notes

A poem about my Grandmother... Gladys- Lung Cancer...

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  • Christina-is-crazy
    September 22, 2008

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    Hey
    First id like to say
    this is a beautiful poem.
    I really liked it.
    I held this contest becasue my aunt just died not that long ago.
    and i wanted to see what other people
    thought and felt about ther loved ones who passed
    and there love ones who are dying.
    Such an amazing poem.
    i really like your writing
    Thanks so much for entering my contest
    i hope to see some of your other poems in my upcoming contest~



    ~~~christina