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you bought me broken so, my heart is always yours

You and I
Oblivion to the world we live
Ubiquitous vibrant

Bold shades
Of future sparkle
Under the sunshine
Girth of past lurks afar
Hidden behind the
Time spelling few painful

Memories written in tears that are now fading
Eternally yours is now

Beckoned in my palms for your eyes to understand
Resting my head
On your strong shoulders
Keeping hopes alive I
Etch your love in my heart
Nesting dreams of us

Seamless in my eyes
Obtrusive aspirations

Make my mind to finally think clear
Yearning for safety of your arms

Heart listens to your heartbeats
Echoing our story
Asphalt as hugs your
Ravishing masculine cuts
Teasingly allures me

In your world to be lost
Sipping wine from your eyes I get drunk in your love

Apprentice to the
Limber times bending for happiness
Warm butterfly wishes soar
Abounding smiles fly
Yielding to passing by
Screaming silence of

Yesterday written in black.
Obsequious flattery of cliché
Unveil hidden desires I secretly dream
Revealed open is now my heart only for you to read
Sincere words I’ve written – you bought me broken so, my heart  is always yours

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  • maralisa silver member
    September 28, 2008
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    a brilliant take on the promt I love your methororic imagery good luck in the contest


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    September 23, 2008
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    all i can say is keep it flowing my friend, it is something amazing, good luck in the contest


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    September 21, 2008

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    Very unique take on the prompt
    I don't think anyone has gone this route with one of my prompts before

    Well penned and quite creative
    This was wonderful


  • W B Burkholder
    September 21, 2008
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    very nice accrostic here Bravo