You and I
Oblivion to the world we live
Ubiquitous vibrant
Bold shades
Of future sparkle
Under the sunshine
Girth of past lurks afar
Hidden behind the
Time spelling few painful
Memories written in tears that are now fading
Eternally yours is now
Beckoned in my palms for your eyes to understand
Resting my head
On your strong shoulders
Keeping hopes alive I
Etch your love in my heart
Nesting dreams of us
Seamless in my eyes
Obtrusive aspirations
Make my mind to finally think clear
Yearning for safety of your arms
Heart listens to your heartbeats
Echoing our story
Asphalt as hugs your
Ravishing masculine cuts
Teasingly allures me
In your world to be lost
Sipping wine from your eyes I get drunk in your love
Apprentice to the
Limber times bending for happiness
Warm butterfly wishes soar
Abounding smiles fly
Yielding to passing by
Screaming silence of
Yesterday written in black.
Obsequious flattery of cliché
Unveil hidden desires I secretly dream
Revealed open is now my heart only for you to read
Sincere words I’ve written – you bought me broken so, my heart is always yours
In a list
A contest entry
- Teddy Bears and Sweet Tea - Like Americana At Noon by lowercase prelude.
3050 points, ended October 5, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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a brilliant take on the promt I love your methororic imagery good luck in the contest


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all i can say is keep it flowing my friend, it is something amazing, good luck in the contest
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Very unique take on the prompt
I don't think anyone has gone this route with one of my prompts before
Well penned and quite creative
This was wonderful -
very nice accrostic here Bravo




