throbbing transference
bleeding adieu of summer
seed's potent slumber
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colorful replete
terminal extravagance
fragrant rose repose
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written on skyline
autumn's complete register
crimson chronicles
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A contest entry
- HAIKU by Swan song.
550 points, ended October 5, 2008, 17 entries
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I love these haikus, especially the first one. It conveys so much of autumn without making any direct reference to it
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written on skyline
autumn's complete register
crimson chronicles
This was the haiku I enjoyed the most out of the three thank you so much
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Very sweet sentiments indeed!
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I enjoyed reading, lovely images. I like "seed's potent slumber" and "crimson chronicles".
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This is excellent
not only do each indicate transition, but from the first to the last haiku. I loved your choice of 'bleeding adieu', 'terminal extravagance' and 'autumn's complete'. Then the wording that follows each other: 'throbbing - colorful - written' and 'bleeding - terminal - autumn', also 'seed - fragrant - crimson'. Oh, I can go on. This is excellent - poems within a poem! Best for you in the contest.
Frans
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