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Where is my love? 9/20/08

It's gone,
into the past,
out of the future.
All that's left for
me now
is one cheap fuck
after another.

A different bed,
a different man,
a new one every night.
A new scent,
a new embrace,
a new taste
of lips against
my skin,
already bruised
from other teeth.


Not lovable,
only fuckable.

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Kitsune Kyuuketsuki

based on this picture.

http://i107.photobucket.com/albums/m295/bitbit1976/Whereismylove.jpg

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  • DramaQueen469 gold member
    October 23, 2008
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    Oh... absolutely heartbreaking. WELL DONE and thank you for entering.

    ~*~DramaQueen469~*~


  • eleno
    October 17, 2008

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    this is so sad, but a trully excellent take on the prompt. i've seen that picture on a number of occasions before, and as an artist i couldn't help but appreciate the depth of its beuty. ur poem really connects with it. great work.


  • myrataal silver member
    September 22, 2008
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    I wish I could erase all for you ...

    and give you a new life.


    How sad I am to read of your pain on your Author's page. The tears I cry is real. Please take my words as tokens of myrrh for your wounds.

    Love
    Myra


  • Darklordkya
    September 21, 2008
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    "It's gone, into the past, out of the future."

    This part really drew me in. It made me think that there is more behind what is being said. You really captured the fear from the situation. Also I liked how you based it off of the picture. Amazing job.

    -Anna