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I Call Her, My Mumsy !

She’s a lover of beauty
when an unborn creation
develops in her mind
some images blossom
and reflections shapely form
the “What is it?” question
is now a visible vision.

She is an enthusiast of art
like an echoed song in her heart
a tune without lyrics at the start
but as she drones repeatedly
like a mantra; she closely
chants until the sounds
transformed into words.

A good friend, a confidant to Moony
A beautiful friend to her Buddy
An excellent master of Jake
A superb cook of veggies and steak
A sweet, endearing mentor to me
And I love her very truly
So I call her, my Mumsy!



Summer51

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I send love to you,

Aesthete2000 (Mumsy)


Summer51

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Comments

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  • LadyLavender gold member
    September 21, 2008
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    This was so lovely and furthermore a fun read.

    Thank you for entering.


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    September 21, 2008

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    Sweet, sweet Summer!
    Thank you for all those observant words,
    looking from afar, noticing so many things!!
    Ah, yes, the "What is it" stage!



    Thank you, Summer.

    Mumsy

    • Summer52
      September 21, 2008
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      Yes, it's done, Mumsy!

      Thank you for the comment.

      Summer51


  • moon2u
    September 21, 2008

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    Yeah Mumsy!
    I had to stop by and comment on this one
    great job Summer
    let us honour those who deserve our praise
    Aesthete 2000


    • Summer52
      September 21, 2008
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      Yes, kismoony...give credit where(whom) the credit is due.

      Thanks.


      Summer51

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