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Test Tube Tactics

 

I am the squirming fetus
of all the things
you wish
you had never let
fester inside you

 

because

 


a curled up mess
on your bathroom floor

 


has never looked


this threatening.

 

Author notes

There are no more ways to relieve the pain...

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  • etoile
    January 8

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    oh wow
    this is amazing. i love it.
    the imagery is beautiful and the ending is so strong.
    this entire poem is a very strong write.

    thanks for entering and goodluck


  • Rhythm Child
    November 7, 2008
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    this was fantastic, i loved the thought behind it and the wording was amazing, this is something i have never read the likes of before, its amazing how original this actually is i particularly liked the very first line, i thought that was genius
    once again this was a great poem
    one of my favourites today


  • written-in-ink
    October 5, 2008

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    very nice

    a really good concept and i think you said what all of us were scared to admit

    good job


  • TChaplinette
    September 22, 2008
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    wow....

    this is way intnse girlie..

    i LOVE it, for reals.


  • She Stole My Voice
    September 21, 2008

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    Oh my gosh.
    I honestly have no idea what to say.
    It's very vivid.
    Bookmarking fo sho.
    ♥


    -Mary

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