I wanted to stay a virgin
until I met you
And baby I belived
that your love was true
So I lost it
The morning after I gave it all away
I woke up and I began to sway
I ran to the bathroom to give it all back
Believeing it could happen was the only thing I lacked
then I lost it (last nights dinner)
Almost two weeks later I sat on the net
My period hadn't come, I started to fret
So I messaged a rich ex boyfriend for a spot of cash
I didn't want to risk it, or do anything rash
So I got it
I took the vitamins and did everything I could
I hadn't told him yet, though I new I should
And he was just joking when he pushed me to the ground
When I stood up blood was what I found
I had lost it
I got to hospital but they wouldn't confirm
But my mom started to avoid me, like some kind of germ
And for the next few months him and I would drift apart
Until finally he would break my heart
I had lost him
Author notes
option 2
sorry if this didn't apply, i started with somthing else and then...this transpired...sorry if u dont like it just remove it
A contest entry
- Memories Never Die by Starz of Heaven.
1000 points, ended October 21, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - OPTIONS: by sca.
1170 points, ended October 16, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
sooo?
Comments
1 - 7 of 7
-
that is sad . real sad . but u must face it . i did 2 . this is what they say life . accept it as a fact of life . hate him . u must . but be a brave girl .
-
I got to hospital but they wouldn't confirm
But my mom started to avoid me, like some kind of germ
And for the next few months him and I would drift apart
Until finally he would break my heart
I had lost him
<< this was obviously a heart felt write and i think it showed through your words, well done for expressing yourself so well
it was a very good poem -
wow
this is a good poem.. i know how u feel. i went threw something like this... i was pg with my ex's baby he had his friends hit me and he killed it. when i went to go tell him he looked right at me and said "about God D time." now he wants me back and i wont! i hope it gets better for you!
-
This is sad I am sorry that you had to go through this and a baby is not an it. Well to me it is not thanks for your entry be well
-
Jessy My Dear Besty. This is Undoubtfully amazing. You write so beautifly...if I could right what I feel like you do I'd be a great poet..but you're the poet out of the two of us. Thats unmistakable. You are awesome
-
Hey sweetie i know the exact pain you are going through.I lost two.This is very heartfelt and emotional piece here the pain does get better with time.I am living proof.This happened to me in high school so i know.Anyways nice work on this one
-
i'm sorry it still hurts... but it dulls with time...
great write...
Adding your comment:
1 - 7 of 7
