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Dressed in golden light,
harvest moon arrives in song,
playing ancient tunes.
II
Autumn now partakes
in the season's communion
with her memories.
III
Sandy beaches drenched
in foaming waves chasing wind,
chilled by autumn's breath.
Author notes
Haiku: "Enter three haiku to a page or enter one. No more than three. With nothing to do with dead leaves."
A contest entry
- HAIKU by Swan song.
550 points, ended October 5, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very good I liked the imagery here I liked the third haiku the most all three were very good however
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Three very lovely pieces, wonderful wording, my best wishes always.
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Oh my....
Such a Golden tribute to my fav time of the year! Your lines drip with honey & paint a vivid picture! I'm sure you'll do well in the Contest! Unique in it's stance & description!
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Thank you for the kudos!!!!
I appreciate your stopping in tonight to read my work, your thoughtful comments mean a lot. I'll be sure to read your poetry as soon as I'm able to make my way over to your pages. Thanks again, you made my day!!! Take care, Cyn 
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Yes, I agree with Frans. This stands as a single poem quite easily. As a haiku sequence in it is lovely!
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Hello, John,
I hope you are doing well there, and the world is being kind to you. You amaze me by always reading and commenting on all my poetry. I really appreciate your stopping in tonight, as always, your thoughtfulness means a lot to me. You are very observant - and, yes - the three different poems were written in "haiku sequence" as you suggested. Thank you for taking the time to honor my pages with your gracious presence!! I'll be sure to read your latest poetry as soon as I'm able to make my way over to your pages. Thanks again, you made my day!! Take care, Cyn
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I do not know if
this was intended [last lines of each Haiku]: 'playing ancient tunes with her memories chilled by autumn's breath' - this sure is lovely. With or without your lovely picture, these Haiku not only flow as 'one' poem, but build to crescendo - well done. Best in the contest. Frans
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Hi Frans,
I appreciate your stopping in tonight to read my work, your thoughtful comments mean a lot. You are very observant - yes, the three different haikus were written in a sequence, to "build to cresendo" as you suggested. Thank you for taking the time to read and honor my pages!!! I'll be sure to read your latest poetry as soon as I'm able to make my way over to your pages. Thanks again, you made my day!!! Take care, Cyn
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excellent
These are 3 great haiku's
I do well to do one LOL
Best of luck in the contest
I entered too and hope you come give mine a read as well
Also nice to meet you
Hugs
Susan~~~
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Thank you for the kudos!!!!
I appreciate your stopping in tonight to read my work, your thoughtful comments mean a lot. I'll be sure to read your poetry as soon as I'm able to make my way over to your pages. Thanks again, you made my day!!! Take care, Cyn
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