Cradled in passion palms
I accept your affections
Return an assertive kiss
As entwined tongues singe
Caresses stroll fleshy heat
Moisture trickles brows
My legs wrap waist in need
This closeness begs intimacy
Now parting with urge
So breathless in desire
To fulfill this void’s wish
My cave is your domain
Inside you animate
Total access is your command
Penetrating meets demands
Writhing with snakes of love
We convulse with thrill
I with shivering squeals
Interweaving magic works
Twisting me into place
Surged in electrical bolts
We fire a rhythmic ride
Slowing down to breath
Exhausted merely in delight
A contest entry
- Sensually Erotic - Now open for Prewrites by sensualbutterfly.
450 points, ended September 27, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Cradling leads to kisses and pasionate flow of love. well done as always.. Stroked with love, and sensuality, you well describe the passionate love shared and the beauty of it.




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Hot and steamy piece here!
Surged in electrical bolts
We fire a rhythmic ride
Slowing down to breath
Exhausted merely in delight
Wonderful ending! I love it! Thanks for the entry and good luck


