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Cradle Me

Cradled in passion palms
I accept your affections
Return an assertive kiss
As entwined tongues singe

Caresses stroll fleshy heat
Moisture trickles brows
My legs wrap waist in need
This closeness begs intimacy

Now parting with urge
So breathless in desire
To fulfill this void’s wish
My cave is your domain

Inside you animate
Total access is your command
Penetrating meets demands
Writhing with snakes of love

We convulse with thrill
I with shivering squeals
Interweaving magic works
Twisting me into place

Surged in electrical bolts
We fire a rhythmic ride
Slowing down to breath
Exhausted merely in delight

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  • Confusedboy
    November 29, 2008

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    Cradling leads to kisses and pasionate flow of love. well done as always.. Stroked with love, and sensuality, you well describe the passionate love shared and the beauty of it.


  • sensualbutterfly
    September 21, 2008

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    Hot and steamy piece here!
    Surged in electrical bolts
    We fire a rhythmic ride
    Slowing down to breath
    Exhausted merely in delight

    Wonderful ending! I love it! Thanks for the entry and good luck