The apple of my eye
the beat to my heart
the blue to my sky
my desire, my spark
the passion that surges
like a tempestuous sea
that flows like a river
through the heart of me
my pillar of strength
my light in the dark
the one I turn to when
my world seems stark
my comfort and warmth
a late summer breeze
my port in a storm
when I need peace
We are the sky and the earth
joined in seamless harmony
loving each other
for all eternity
Please tell me what you think
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This is just beautiful hon...love certainly suits you..and definately brings out the best in you. The last stanza to this lovely piece is a beautiful thought. Continue to pen these wonderful pieces.
All the best
Emma
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Stunning Work
Stunningly-beautful Sugar. Wonderful words of deep affection and even deeper love in this breathtaking piece of writing. Wonderful work, here.
Darkest love to you
Wayne Leon
xx
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This is very special to me, thank you sweetie for your lovely comment, so glad you enjoyed.
Darkest love to you
always Chelle xxx
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Pretty
Very pretty words, sis. Theye cho how I feel about my lady love. Good work.
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what a wonderfull romantic write
Wow the start reminds me of baseshunters song angel in the night love it. It flows really well too. Just thought I would swing by as I have not done in a while. Love matty
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This is fun and romantic
Your last stanza is truly 'poetic'. It is a beautiful thought. "We are the sky and the earth
joined in seamless harmony loving each other
for all eternity."
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What I think is beautiful
Love and nature painting its beauty
We are the sky and the earth
joined in seamless harmony
loving each other
for all eternity.. adore this stanza
Julie
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Great!
Wow, this is such a beautiful love poem. When I first started reading, I was thinking "Oh, cliche in the beginning with "apple of my eye" but it actually doesn't take from the poem at all! I'm absolutly in love with this poem, terrific =]
<3
Steph
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