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Bedtime

Strings of celebration
Toasts to good times
Laughter giggles in the air
Dances floor if packed
Bottles of bear are popped
Merriment is defined

Fame and fortune plays in your garden
Home is filled with antique sparkles
Crystals are shinning
Gold and silver are showcased
Diamonds are girl’s best friend

Friends are knocking at the door
Family showers undying love
Everyone wants a piece of pie
You’ve baked with perfection

Greens in your pocket
President you give away to charities
So much you’ve given
With the gifts in return
Desire to be your friends

But now is the time when sun has settle down
Evening has brought in
A new friend named loneliness

Fortune has slipped through your fingers
Fame is diming candle light
Family once stood by has taken a flight
Friends tasting to enjoyment have dithered
Silence echoes on the dance floor

Music of the night plays
The notes of pain
Mirror reflects the shadows
Hidden behind the masks
Face painted with perfect makeup

Everyone bows down to the dawn
Presidential dollars rule the world
But my heart awaits for you here
From yesterday to now until tomorrow
For the moon I am to shine
Through your darkest nights
For I’ve been waiting for you to turn
And once look into my eyes
That tell my love story
My heart wants to read to you at bedtime

Author notes

Option 3 - quote - "Most people want to be the sun that brightens up your life, but I'd rather be the moon that shines down on you in your darkest hours."-Unknown

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  • crivanea silver member
    October 4, 2008

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    nice take on the prompt..thnx for this lovely memory..some moments r wroth cherishing..best of luck in the contest..


  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 26, 2008
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    Beautiful

    Indeed i to so love the soft shine of the moon and feel the love about you in its candlight glow


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    September 23, 2008

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    wonderfully done my friend, i mean that you have done a great job on this, i mean you have something he that just shines. keep it flowing and good luck in the contest