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Autumn Cool




autumn breezes cool
leaves bringing on their color
palette of fire





Words: K.Botka
9/20/08

Author notes

I love Autumn & it's colors....

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  • Swan song gold member
    October 5, 2008
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    You are doing very very good thank you for entering keep em coming


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    September 21, 2008

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    Breathtakingly Beautiful!!!

    A wonderful ode to fall's lovely finery!!! Wishinhg you the best of luck in the contest!!! Peace, Cyn


  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    September 21, 2008

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    Very nice reflection on the hues of Autumn. Your third line is an excellent choice of words and give this poem good depth. Well Done my friend.

    Brother Dennis


  • Darkwell
    September 20, 2008

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    its amazing how much you said in so little words

    palette of fire

    super finish


  • Cynewulf
    September 20, 2008

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    I hate the autumn, although it has been warm where I live. This is a superb haiku Kath. Just says it all so succinctly.

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