In
The firelight
My fingertips
Follow the
Shape of your face
Every angle
Every line
Every story
Written
I kiss each one
Until I reach
Your soul
Glistens
As your mouth
Speaks in tongues
Upon my body
While
Your hands
Touch mine
Soft and hard
Pulling me in
The silence
Is thunder
And lightening
Without
The storm
As my hands
Reach up
To coax your face
Down
I offer my mouth
For your
Consecration
Your
Tongue
Paints
Your
Blessing
As you
Rain
Colors
All over me
My flowers bloom
For You
For all
The world
To see
A contest entry
- Sensually Erotic - Now open for Prewrites by sensualbutterfly.
450 points, ended September 27, 2008, 16 entries
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I find it very interesting the influx of new reads on this one... and the lovely youth of some of my commentators...thank you all for your comments, I very much appreciate them.
And yes, I loved this person very much...
I am glad that you can see that sexual intimacy is not solely the act of sex itself (altho’ that is an important part of it)... it is also about sharing… a giving and taking that through expressing need and vulnerability can be very healing and uplifting.
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stunning
the amount of love in here is huge. It didn't make me cringe like these sorts of poems usually do - in fact I found it sweet (: beautiful (:
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AMAZING
ITS ONE OF THE MOST BEAUTIFUL POMS IVE READ IN ALONG TIME THAKS FOR SHARING IT -
Great job
Powerful is all i can say.... great job
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A very intimate and sensual piece of poetry that was a pleasure to read and ponder.
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Good
This is Lovely..
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WOW
Very nice job...
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So touching and beautiful...every word touched my soul. Thank you for the entry and good luck
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Beautiful
I feel this poem allows the reader to understand the vulnerability one allows to themselves as facing the daunting task of revealing their depths openly to another..
Good stuff.
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