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...

Your violet eyes,
Regard the truth,
And find my lies.
For the violent youth.

To the young,
Innocent and feint.
Out your tongue,
With iron restraint.

The gallant boy,
The timid ploy,
And a plastic toy,
For love of joy.

So the plaything,
Lies down beside our,
Copper ring,
And a lone cigar.

Loner,
Silent child.
Idiot,
Deviant smiled.

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  • Lexie
    September 20, 2008

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    wow, i liked this poem a lot! it was really good!

    To the young,
    Innocent and feint.
    Out your tongue,
    With iron restraint.

    great job!


    • kierancluchey
      September 22, 2008
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      Hey, thanks.. I've been starved of ideas for poems and this one basically came right out of the blue, I'm not finished it either.