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Keeper of Cold Hearts

 

Sweet and Bitter Medusa

beast of hells charm....

Seductress and stone hedge.

Keeper of cold and blood-less hearts.

 

It has been centuries

since our paths have crossed.

AND now...you plead...unto

Lair of Dragon seeking

refuge and mercy.

 

I see through thee...

your plot and disception,

hungering for treasures

of eternal dragon power.

 

Whatever glare or beauty

you transform;

I promise thee,

the Lair of Dragon you will

humbly serve,

not rule as  Evils Queen!

 

hisssss and spit...

spit and hissssss...

you have under-estimated

the bold dragon hearts!

 

tempt all you wish...

Medusa,

keeper of cold and blood-less

hearts.

 

 

 

 Many

 Medusa's in life

 we are challenged to encounter.

 Look away...do not dare to gaze

 lest your heart be cast into stone.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

contest entry: MEDUSA -
I am seeking a Poetess of Great Seductive
and Persuasive Power
to tempt the entrants of the contest!

1000 points will be delivered as your treasure
for commenting on
their poems submitted using the voice of Medusa...
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as the vile
and seductive MEDUSA!


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A contest entry

Many "medusa's " in life we may face...are you bold enough to harness her!

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  • FlamesDragoness
    October 29, 2008
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    we wish to thank and honor Poetess Immortal Obscurity
    for serving as our MEDUSA writer in the Battle
    Contest for Lair of Dragon!

    you were gut-wrenching wonderful!
    flamesdragoness!
    WE Salute you in the Lair of Dragon.


  • Yah-rod
    September 27, 2008

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    Her capture is underway. Tomorrow it will be complete.

    You use subtleties well in your writing. "Thought-less" hearts is an insight into a cleft between heart and mind that should not be there, yet nobody notices it is not.

    Nice conclusion to this poem. It leaves room for more dragons to soar. And they will.

    Mordegast

  • FlamesDragoness
    September 24, 2008
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    she charms so easily doesnt she...MEDUSA...
    you have no idea the dragon powers that will
    confine thee...warriors of great poetic might!
    flamesdragoness


  • Immortal Obscurity gold member
    September 24, 2008

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    Dear Poet,

    I hold within my grasp the gift of verbiage; All will bow before your vocabulary, as seduction rolls languidly off your tongue.

    You will need much more than mere dragon-power to defeat me.

    -M.


  • Dark Otter
    September 24, 2008
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    Nisssse Confrontation!

    Reptiles know one another. You passed her challenge.

  • FlamesDragoness
    September 22, 2008
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    POSITION FILLED>>>>>thankyou for your interest!
    flamesdragoness
    stand ready...she will approach..what name and image
    we do not know! Hide thy wryling childrens curiosity.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 21, 2008

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    Ah..a thoughtful description revealing the many layers of the life....well done..and thanks for sharing..


  • Angelsojaded
    September 21, 2008

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    I am so "wowed" this was incredible and unique! I love to read about topics I myself could never touch. Thank you for saring your wondeful talent. This is truly a wonderful read!


  • Sunkissed xo
    September 20, 2008

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    wow, this is a very deep and intense poem. it is very meaningful, and has an exotic beauty to it. it has been written well, and has a unique beat to it. I really like the title, it fits the poem very well.
    thanks so much for sharing it, and well done!

    - Katie

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