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Haiku 159

autumn coloured fall
precedes white winter's forecast
of brilliant spring days

Author notes

'Down-under' we say 'brill-yant'

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  • Swan song gold member
    October 5, 2008
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    Now that is a cherful way to look at it lol Very good poem thank yu for entering


    • Shenton silver member
      October 5, 2008
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      Swan song

      Thank you for your comments and for your generous applause.

      Best wishes from 'down-under'.

      Shenton