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Fat Cat!!!

I am a happy fat cat eating is what I do
today I stole some fish from the aquarium at the zoo
Juicy steak from The Ruth's Chris steakhouse is always nice
I must admit it tastes much better than lizards and mice
Tender viddles, Purina cat chow, and meow mix are all okay
but I think I will eat pesky Pittbull's dog food today
you can pamper me with wet fancy feast cat food all week
but only the best fancy meat will make my fur soft and sleek
yes I am a happy fat cat that loves to eat
and as you can see my favorites are fish and meat

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  • individuality gold member
    September 9, 2009

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    a good poem penned with a fine pen, as fat as a cat with no woolly hat who ate the mat that he was sat on, he's looks like two but he's only one, son of a gun, he's fat.


  • Rovingone gold member
    February 14, 2009

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    Oh, so sweet. Your cat must be a real darling. My cat is an old white Siamese but she is such a little gourmet always telling me when she needs a new meal.

  • Purrsanthema
    February 11, 2009
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    This is so much fun!!!!!!!!!!


  • teddybare gold member
    February 1, 2009

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    i chuckled my way through this

    and i'm not even a cat person
    cute lil write this
    ~teddybare~


  • PastelMoons gold member
    January 31, 2009

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    I have a cat just like this
    He lives to eat!
    This is adorable
    thanks for sharing

    ~Pastel


  • darkheart76
    January 20, 2009
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    great

    2 cute


  • Arizona Sunset
    November 15, 2008

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    this is adorable I love kitty cats so this was a big winner for me Blessings always~ Trisha~


  • Naked Angel gold member
    November 14, 2008
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    This is really very cute. Thanks for reading plight before christmas, hope you enjoyed it
    have a nice day littlefishone


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    November 13, 2008

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    Awwww....cute write !

    What a great, fun poem you have penned here As the owner of one VERY spoilt cat who rules the house, I can truly relate to this one


  • condor gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    Excellent poem and one that i enjoy to the end. You said it just like it is. Stealing from the aquarium....naughty kitty! This does sound like the perfect description of a cats eating habits. They are so varied in their diet. Mine use to eat vegetables with their meat. They loved peas and mash spud. I loved this write to bits. Thank you.


  • Naked Angel gold member
    November 4, 2008

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    lol

    I could almost hear that fat greedy cat purring this is such a clever and very funny write,i love it thanks for sharing littlefishone

  • mina nagi gold member
    October 31, 2008

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    hahaha... don't forget desert Micecream ....

    mina


  • artis
    October 29, 2008

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    ah, the life of a feline, purring and pruning and eating the finest gourmet,

    drawing glance and pets from others but fiercly independent. this is a cute poem, one can almost picture the gluttonous tubby cat. ~~~Artis


  • geetarrstarr
    October 26, 2008

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    Cute

    This is so adorable! It really shows your love of cats. I really like your rhyming scheme too. I can tell you really paid attention to it!


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 20, 2008

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    Love the humor and how you painted a little story.
    I can see this Fat cat in my mind
    Best wishes
    Julie

  • subrosa
    October 8, 2008
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    fun fun fun

    i definitly thought of my cat when i read this - this is such a fun poem!
    keep it up!


  • RAWR-itsPurplePixie
    October 7, 2008
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    This is an absolutely delightful write.


  • AsIThink gold member
    October 2, 2008

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    hahaha...very cute; very entertaining. I thought this was wonderful to write from a cat's perspective (I have recently been doing this exact thing in a story) and so this caught hold of my imagination. Some good humor here too.

    AsIThink...


  • Gwenevere
    October 2, 2008

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    Lovely poem.The cat got the cream again.I can just see it with it's rummy rubbing on the floor.Who says she looks as though she's having kittens?????It eas one steak too many, Ros


  • Kazytc gold member
    September 30, 2008

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    Awww this is just soooo cute!

    I adore cats so this lovely ode to cats and especially those who love their food like our cute Smudge (pictured on my authors page) really hit in there, it is just soo cute and sweet and such fun too, wow, love it, well done, write on.
    Best of Luck and hope you win Gold in every contest you enter. Well done!
    Poetic Hugs,
    Kaz.
    Kazytc xx xx


  • Wandering Woodchuck gold member
    September 30, 2008
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    Haha. I like this one alot. It is very funny. You have a great sense of humor.

    Mike


  • spideracer gold member
    September 29, 2008

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    Oh so cute

    In the first line there should be a comma between cat and eating, otherwise a beautiful poem from a cats perspective.


  • freespirit51 gold member
    September 25, 2008

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    Such a cute and humble little poem my freind. I can imagine on of my past cats actually saying this. I had one the enjoyed italian food. and another popcorn the other cardboard so I can imagine yours wanting to eat his from the aquarium and the dog food. Thanks for the laugh.


  • Anu-Nataraj
    September 24, 2008

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    hahahahahaha
    beautiful poet.....beautiful!!!.............
    hahaha made me laugh although i consider this an adorable piece....but im too amateur to judge!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    lovely again!!!!!
    ~Hugs~
    ~Anagha-Nataraj~


  • Amera gold member
    September 24, 2008

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    hehe... this is delightful! You left a nice comment on one of my poems so I thought I'd stop by your house and read your work. This is fun, free flowing and delightful with the end rhyme.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Riamh
    September 24, 2008

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    Must be related to my cat, an eating and crying machine, if ever there was one.
    Good, carefree poem. well done.

    Slayer


  • Symphony
    September 23, 2008

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    lol most cats really do love their food dont think! i think i've only ever met one cat who wasn't all that interested in food - and only ate it when i was eating mine ... but she was more human than feline, LOL.

    nice job on this, made me chuckle!


  • Legend silver member
    September 22, 2008

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    This just goes to show what i have always thought of cat they Eat, Sleep. and do nothing in return A great little piece that made for an enjoyable read well done


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    September 21, 2008

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    Cool!!!

    Wonderful!!!
    Fun, perky & humorous...
    Great descriptive narrative that made me smile...
    Keep up the good work...
    Well done!!!


  • poetryality silver member
    September 21, 2008

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    Wonderful and whimsical! I smiled throughout the read. I am a dog fan. Cats are way too cool, and too much like people with attitudes for me. A cat would not work well in my house, they'd have to leave their attitude at the door. LOL

    Your personification of a cat is ingenious. Great fun read here pet. Thanks!


    Blessings & Love ♥

    Renee

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