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Remembering Yesterday

Wasn't it yesterday...

We frolicked in the autumn leaves
Laughing and dancing with restless glee
Your eyes were gleaming, so full of life
You were, to my heart, such a great delight

I was so young and Oh so debonair
As I slipped my fingers through your golden hair
Your eyes would twinkle in the moons soft glow
Yet no matter the reasons we just never let go.

I look at you now as you gaze at the sea
And still love the woman you've come to be.

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  • Venus25
    September 26, 2008
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    A wonderful and warm creation


  • Paloszoo gold member
    September 22, 2008

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    Beautiful!

    This is siply a beautiful and loving poem for the love of your life. Breathtaking imagery. Perfect flow and rhyme make the read that much more enjoyable. Well done!


  • Janice M Pickett
    September 21, 2008

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    I am sooooo jealous

    Hmf...My Husband having an affair...darn..Oh Well thems the breaks. I just love your gentle loving ways.

    Well done sweety pie...


  • poetryality silver member
    September 20, 2008

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    What a gorgeous tribute to the one you love. Your sentiments are rich and generously shared with all. Very loving and indeed a beautiful work of poetry,


    Much love Always ♥

    Renee