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Whirlwind Of Passion

 

 

 

 

 

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Fingers tracing every curve

 

luscious

       

gorgeous

 

smooth

 

skin so soft and delicate

like that of a newborn baby

my hands begin to float over you

gently touching your back

 

I slowly touch down

massaging your shoulders

rubbing and pounding out

every knot in your back

 

you passionately sigh

as I tenderly enter you

hands still moving

feeling your firm breasts

 

I pull your body toward mine

kisses fall upon your neck

whispers of love in your ear

my lips find yours

 

we fall continuously

into this whirlwind of passion

emotions burn deep inside

as we toss and turn

 

becoming one together

the moon comes out

shines down upon you

as I slowly sit back 

 

to admire the beauty

and sensuality of you

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Sensually Erotic

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Comments


  • sensualbutterfly
    September 21, 2008

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    So Sensual and soft! Tender and loving! Yet smoldering hot! The sweetest yet! Wonderfully romantic! Thank you for the entry


  • poetryality silver member
    September 20, 2008

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    This is sensual and very well written. The tenderness here is evident. I love erotica that doese to take us to the raunchy world of porn. This is far from that my friend! Very lovely! I wish you well in the challenge.


    Much Love ♥

    Renee