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The Undertaker

The moon, she glides
Through dark night sky
Forever my guide
In my cursed quest

Silent companion of my nightly raids
Never questions my will
My beloved
To her I offer sacrifice
Goddess

Witness to my deeds
Her light brings warmth
And shuns grief
From deep within
This aching heart of mine

How I would survive
Without her endless guide
Unto her
I even lay my life

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Prompt 3

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  • crivanea silver member
    October 4, 2008

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    very nice take on the prompt..nice job!..each stanza has its own unique charm..best of luck in the contest