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I've tasted
the stars
that lay themselves to sleep

on the surface
of your eyes.


There is a spot
within a day
where chins jut skywards
seeking a symphony
in blue and white.
And you whisper,

"Tonight, tonight."





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Prompt Two: Moonlight

Believe in me,
As I believe in you,
Tonight


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  • crivanea silver member
    October 4, 2008

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    breathtaking...wow...u have a way w/ words!..nice job..short..but it leaves me hanging for more..lovely write..best of luck