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Bathing in Moonlight

Full moon, your magic light shines down on me,
Your silver spell a cherished memory,
Illuminating beams; sweet mystery.

You bring my spirit utter ecstasy,             
Delightful light of perfect harmony,
Full moon, your magic light shines down on me.

You calm my storms till I feel heavenly,
Your touch is like a lover’s hand on me,
Illuminating beams; sweet mystery.

Seductive flirt with my reality,
You chain my heart; bequeathing liberty,
Full moon, your magic light shines down on me.

Alluring dreams into conspiracy
Of moon lit images illusory.
Illuminating beams; sweet mystery.

A silver frail note flutters playfully,
Enchanting melody; night’s symphony,
Full moon, your magic light shines down on me,
Illuminating beams; sweet mystery.

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Prompt Two: Moonlight

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  • crivanea
    October 4, 2008

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    nice take on the prompt..lovely imagery..and u did a nice job painting moonlight.thnx for the entry.best of luck


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    September 21, 2008

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    WOW! What a wonderful reflection on the moon and its'interaction with you. The monorhyme is quite effective in this thoughtful poem. Well done my friend.

    Dennis