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Aftershocks

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Flesh to flesh, hands to hips
passion seeps on through
Plump teasing, sultry lips
challenging thoughts within you

Eye to eye, face to fingertips
a fire is burning high
Tempting mouth, heartbeat skips
as desires upon us lie

Chest to chest, chains to clit
piercing's to entice your eyes
Tug or pull to make you fit
between luscious loving thighs

Hand in hand, hot and heavy
your mouth makes me wild
To lick and bite excite me
you can't stop the passions style

Tits to tease, thoughts turn tame
and we go a slower pace
Tender loving is done the same
and greatly changes face

Mouth to mine, makes me moist
and my body starts to dance
Above or under it is your choice
its all filled with sweet romance

Riding slow then rough, really makes me race
to bring the pleasure to a newer height
Sweet caresses and a fantasy to chase,
makes for a most passionate night

Whispers in the wind, wakes up this woman
and I can surely tease to please
All spots tempted by the lips of my man
can bring me to sweet ecstasy

Body piercing's brings out the best
of a sensuous night of foreplay
His breathing tells me he's ready for the rest
and then hardcore is on its way

So for now I shall end it here
with his lips about a shaved mound
Moans are starting to escape me dear
and the greatest climax had been found

In and out he slowly slides
fingertips gripping my tight rear
Thumb to clit, in he glides
and passions drawing near

Tender lips now cover my own
and hips are bound by heat
Eyes interlock a new height has grown,
and aftershocks tickle our feet.

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  • Blueskywonder
    September 22, 2008

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    Whoah!! This oozes sensuality like warm pleasure from the the act of complete union. Your imagery is HOT!
    very elegantly expressed and romanticly delivered. Great write!


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    September 21, 2008

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    fans face and heads to the shower...your words and your background! well wow! now were is that Silent Cougar of mine


  • Griswold silver member
    September 20, 2008

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    Wonderfully sensual write sweetheart. Aftershocks from a 7.2 earthquake will still rock your world. Love you baby...Scott


  • Swan song gold member
    September 20, 2008

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    Mouth to mine, makes me moist
    and my body starts to dance
    Above or under it is your choice
    its all filled with sweet romance

    oh my you are truly sensual beautiful all the way


  • poetryality silver member
    September 20, 2008

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    This is HOT! Damn! Whenever I read your erotica I need to go find out where my husband is and see why he is so quiet! I'm about to make him hollar! LOL Great poetry here dear lady! The best to you in the contest but I can't see how any poem here would be as sensually delicious!


    Always ♥

    Renee


  • cricketjeff gold member
    September 20, 2008
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    Hot stuff!!!!!


    Hotter'n'hell in fact. Steam out of the ears writing!


  • sensualbutterfly
    September 20, 2008

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    I love the picture! The write...well...that was smokin hot! Had me squirming in my chair! And you ended it before it got too hot! Though would like to see an continuation of this one! Thanks for entering


  • The Drifter
    September 20, 2008

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    Very beautiful--It grabed me Quick and held me through the whole ride. Thought provoking, causing to remember times in the past nice but not nearly like what you portay
    Maybe some day we can sit together.
    and talk on a porch
    For a little while stay
    Lost in each other thoughts and words
    A bit of heaven and peace shared by two people
    and nothing more.
    For you and your writings give some peace, some day I would like to express.
    to you my thoughts and emotions my Lady Confessor
    before heading out on my way.
    Love you,
    bw


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    September 20, 2008

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    Sensually erotic alright!
    Lovely work as always my friend.
    Great imagery and I love your background.
    Good luck and keep it up!




    Jeremy0826


    • PassionsPromise gold member
      September 20, 2008
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      Thanks Jer
      Always a pleasure hearing from you.
      Glad you enjoyed this.
      My Ap G/f AngelwithDarkwings made this for me
      isnt she awesome!!!

  • mcfreeman
    September 20, 2008
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    Always satisfying to read

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