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[ shedding skins in divine surrender ]

shedding skins in divine surrender
insecure words make the new bestseller
new york times puts out blank pages
and we'll see the face of god

harmonics caught on MRI
point to age old puzzles, what is life?
mirror neurons fire as we take the world inside
and you will know then you are god

yeah... whatever.... tell me what you think

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  • Evenstar gold member
    July 4

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    ohh,this is nice.lol. Really written well,just like you said it would be. No least favorite parts or anything,all of this is a good read.can't say anything else.


  • ERiKA.ahhhh
    November 2, 2008
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    I adore the title of this piece! The whole structure is breath taking. Good job in writing it! :]