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Beat Cafe


                                Went down to the Beat Café
to throw around a mad scribble of words
to see if they would stick
to the walls.
            Saw broken angels and hobos at the entrance,
waiting for a sign from some unseen god
dressed in rags,
                          saw a dharma bum playing a flute,
    saw an Apache warrior dancing on the sidewalk,
heard all the hymns of Coney Island echoing off
half asleep lampposts.
                Went inside, ordered a latte
          and began staring at all the pictures hanging
like ghosts above the bookshelves.
                There was Ferlinghetti in a straw hat
    and Phil Whalen playing chess with Diane DiPrima
                          and over in the corner,
right next to an ancient cash register,
        Kerouac, not yet drunk,
                  was holding his mother’s cat
  and he looked as though his eyes had been devoured
by roll upon roll of teletype paper.
      And there was Lamantia discussing surrealistic billboards with Anne Waldman
                  and as Ted Joans brought Bukowski
    another keg of green beer,
        Neil Cassidy kissed the café owner on the neck
                  and fondled her pleasantly startled breasts.
                      Gregory Corso,
with his wild mediterranean eyes,
passed around a flask of perfectly fermented Italian wine
      and when Gary Synder dropped by
                    everyone fell to the floor in zen posture
and meditated on the essence
of trees.
              Bob Dylan was dressed in his mercury mask,
sang a couple of lines from Desolation Row
    while Michael McClure, looking like one
of Bodicelli’s angels, played the autoharp.
                A drab faced Burroughs,
with a ripe red apple stuck between his teeth,
        idly fingered a yellow newspaper looking for a line,
                  an image to cut and paste into his next
                          manuscript.
        And there was Lew Welch and Lenore Kandel
naked at the bathroom door,
          except for a pages of newly formed poetry
      covering up the vital parts
            just in case the cops showed up.
                                    And when Allen Ginsberg
let out a holy howl of mercy
they all gathered on one small stage
to chant the Beatific Rhapsody
                  and I walked out of there
          and knew that I had indeed visited
                                Literary Heaven.

Author notes

This was scribbled the other day as a fun exercise

A contest entry

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  • troyias silver member
    December 1, 2008

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    Delightful

    Wonderful. a true delight to read. flow perfect and the thoughts just carried the reader right into the cafe. Great Job.

    *Go with God*, my friend,

    Valerie


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    November 27, 2008

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    If anything, this reminds me of the contemporary poetry of Richard Siken. The first image of the poem - throwing scribbled words onto the wall to see if they would stick (like spaghetti!) - grabbed my attention. After that, it was "ah-moment" after "ah-moment", recognising the names you pulled out of your hat. Lovely to see Bukowski there...

    ... and the dancing Apaches, the Dharma bums - all wonderful, captivating images.

  • Vera Rich
    November 25, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my "Celebrating Poetry and poets" competition. This is certainly celebratory!


  • just mercedes gold member
    October 12, 2008
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    You should scribble more! This is my kind of place. Loved particularly 'naked at the bathroom door, except for pages of newly formed poetry covering up the vital parts'

    which made me think of poetry as something we make to hide our nakedness,

    and that has started a whole new direction of thoughts.
    Good!


  • W B Burkholder
    September 20, 2008

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    Yje whos who of the literary heirarchy penned here marc, Its good to break away now and then and delve into the off the cuff writing, i do that alot it seems these days. as always Bro. awesome stuff


  • Dalaney gold member
    September 20, 2008

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    "Kerouac, not yet drunk,
    was holding his mother’s cat
    and he looked as though his eyes had been devoured
    by roll upon roll of teletype paper..."

    Outstanding! This is the poetry of
    life. Bookmarking, love.

    Lane xxoo


  • Cannonsfire
    September 20, 2008
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    Fun exercise and if there were such a place you could book me a table! C

  • Cinnarry gold member
    September 20, 2008
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    Cheers!


  • word20dragon
    September 20, 2008
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    This Is Fantastic

    This is great awsome, I did not realy know how many beat poets there were I think I am going to have to go out and start reading these poets, The images are like from a surreal dream or acid trip. Poetry like this inspiers me to look deeper into my dream world and my thought and try to come up with new mosaics of thought. Great,Great,bravo,bravo, more,more

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