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You never ment a thing you said....

If you could look into my eyes
And see everything you ever said
From every language you ever muttered
To every movement you ever made
Would you know what you have done
To the lied and leading on
Would you realise whats going on
That's tore me apart inside
If you ever felt the same
As you said and spoke
Would you have told me to start with
And left my mind confused and broke
Even you tho i bet you don't understand how
Or realise what you have done
It's like a pin right threw the soul
And i hope the demons leave you
Because my demons are back now
Because of what i have become
Alone and afraid with no hope in hell
Of every returning to sanity
Do you regret the sweet whispered words
That made my face smile with joy
Or do you laugh with the cruelty
And smile yourself at my tears
As they role down my face in lines
Ripping at my skin
Bleeding my frail wrists caked with blood and scars
Now left with another but this time in the heart
Because you couldn't speak up at the beginning
And tell me you didn't love me from the start

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....and thats what hurts the most

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  • loststorme
    January 28

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    thats exactly how I feel

    my ex just told me I meant nothing......if I could put that feeeling into words...this would be perfect


  • Beauty Of Silence
    October 13, 2008

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    aww

    this is so sad. a very painful write. its very heartfelt and very touching. i hate this feeling. and i sont think anyone enjoys it. keep writing, this was impactful.

  • xDeathxAngelx
    September 25, 2008
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    Amazing =)

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