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i'm sorry

i知 sorry for all the things i never told you,
for ever doubting if your friendship was true.
i知 sorry for all the things left undone,
even though the world viewed us all as one.
i知 sorry for our last goodbye,
as i sit here with tears in my eyes.
i知 sorry for all the things that you have been through,
i知 sorry that i wasn稚 there for you.
i知 sorry that it took our sisters to point out that you did love me,
and that as usual i was as stubborn as could be.
i知 sorry that you are not here now,
that we will never see you again.
i知 sorry that in you we have not only lost our big brother,
but we have lost our best friend.

i'm sorry

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  • MD Masroor
    October 19, 2008

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    Strong and emotional, it connects with the reader since I'm sure that people in general have all faced the same fate. Beautifully penned. Keep up the great work!