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Breather

Breather
Maybe it is just
For the best
To give us both
A little rest
A burst of fresh air
Through two sets of lungs
We're not a married couple
We're both still so young

Maybe I was getting obsessed
Maybe Hollie was getting stressed
But a Breather is all what we need
More broken friendships
Not good indeed

Two weeks
Maybe more apart
To cleanse our soul
Replenish our heart

Always good
How the rest starts now
We don't want to leave it
Till it's too far gone

So here's to the breather
The saviour
Of our friendship

Author notes

Hollie, if you ever read this where I put replenish our heart I actually mean, replenish our Will and how much we can put up with each other Lol

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  • Ingrid wastegash
    October 18, 2008
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    amazingly enlightening poem
    great

    ''we're both still so young''
    <3