the black widow condems her
digs in her flesh planting evil seeds
spilling poisonous venom into her blood
pain lighting up the haze in her brain
breathing it in like seething vapors
cant explain the way she feels
only broken twisted bones
spun up in this black web
screaming voices in her head
shakles prisoning her to this cell
choking on the ink flooding the walls
shredding finger nails clawing her way out
cant find her way back to sanity
forever lost forever damned
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thats fucking awesome
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a chilling and vivid write, master poetess. I love the dark imagery, the kind of writing i could read over and over again. I found a new favorite
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oooh this is a very dark write.
but it was awesome. the imagery was intense and dark. keep penning, this was great
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Awesome! You have commented on my poems since day one. Now, it's time to return the favor! (I was Lucky4u...lol) Great write! Keep it up!
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cant find her way back to sanity
forever lost forever damned <<<< i can relate to this, very good poem -
This poem really worked out well. Dark imagery and descriptions. Love how the shape turned out also. Thanks for sharing it and keep writing.
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Amazing write, deep and dark. Flows perfectly and just as so much raw emotion behind it for the reader to find. I loved it, it suits my tastes. Well done.
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very interesting, I love the overall shape of the poem, was that intended or did it just work out like that?
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Cold, dark and brutal, very, very effective.
It gives enough of a peek and keeps enough shrouded to allow the reader to paint their own dark picture that the words prompt.
Good write.
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