i could drain you completely
latch on and bleed you dry
tear the fiber of your soul to shreds
absorb and possess youlike a demon
force the wings of a devil to take flight
carrying you down the pastures of hell
with death close at hand
your sins claw at you
seducing you with luster
attaching veins into your body
contorting you like a puppet
with me attached to your back
a black souless orb
bourne to extract my vengence upon you
What did you think
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Interesting way to put it. I like it! Morbid imagry.
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EW!
I like it, but it really makes me think of the fleas and how they used to carry the Black plague...lol. Awesome job yet again!
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wow this is amazing!
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Nice and dark write. Nice imagery exposed here. a black souless orb, I love that description. Great write, keep them coming.
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Another beautiful write, only the second piece of yours that I've read and already I can tell that I love your style. I loved the way the words came together in this piece, definately one of the best I've read. Great job
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AMAZING POEM.....such a random subject and yet you pulled it off with style and rythym.My favorite part is the end where it says,"a black souless orb bourne to extract my vengence upon you." This image is so powerful....bravo...keep on writing....scars.
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