Only in your hands
dwells this decision.
No one can take from you
the power of pre-vision.
In your wildest dreams
you get to make this call.
Only hoping that you
choose well is all.
So many envy you
but they can't handle this.
This one is just for you
with its triangular kiss.
Author notes
20. Your Call - Secondhand Serenade
In a list
A contest entry
- All We Feel Is Music To Me by AboveApathy.
450 points, ended October 8, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Wow- this is beautifully written! I love the triangular kiss line. Very good interpretation of the title! I also really appreciate that it's not super long- easy and fun to read. Wonderful!
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Thanks, for the bubbly review lol I love getting those...a fun contest you have going here, hope you get your fill of entries lol
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