Until someone shows me differently
Nature rests its head upon unflnching shoulders
I enlist this welcomed warmth
For there is no greater gift
Or work of consistency in these veins
Reform is out of step just now
My soul relishes in being granted staying power
Author notes
Form - Acrostic
Word - "uniform"
1 having always the same form, manner, or degree : not varying or variable.
2 consistent in conduct or opinion.
3 of the same form with others, conforming to one rule or mode consonant
4 presenting an unvaried appearance of surface, pattern, or color
5 relating to or being convergence of a series whose terms are functions in such manner that the absolute value of the difference between the sum of the first n terms of the series and the sum of all terms can be made arbitrarily small for all values of the domain of the functions by choosing the nth term sufficiently far along in the series
Taken from Mr. Webster
http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/uniform
A contest entry
- Do the Dictionary #2 by fortyninereasons.
600 points, ended September 21, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Constructive critique please.
Comments
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Your Acrostic is great.
Thank you so much for entering
Juls


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Love you, sis.


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Clever write and beautifully expressed!


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Wise woman this is a great write as all your writes are. I like your new photo

Good luck in contest.


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I love the line~ Nature rests its head upon unflinching shoulders...for our Mother is a perfect uniform
niaish dear one for the beautiful words and much luck in the contest


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I REALLY LIKE THIS!!! VERY VERY GOOD!!!! YOU DID AN EXCELLENT EXCELLENT JOB WRITING THIS!!! All your words fit so perfectly!!!! LOVELY JOB!!!! I LOVE IT!!!
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Loved this acrostic and the word you got as well, told with pride here. One thing 'unflenching'....unflinching??
Great word and brilliant take on it
C










