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Uniform


Until someone shows me differently
Nature rests its head upon unflnching shoulders
I enlist this welcomed warmth
For there is no greater gift
Or work of consistency in these veins
Reform is out of step just now
My soul relishes in being granted staying power













Author notes

Form - Acrostic

Word - "uniform"

1 having always the same form, manner, or degree : not varying or variable.
2 consistent in conduct or opinion.
3 of the same form with others, conforming to one rule or mode consonant
4 presenting an unvaried appearance of surface, pattern, or color
5 relating to or being convergence of a series whose terms are functions in such manner that the absolute value of the difference between the sum of the first n terms of the series and the sum of all terms can be made arbitrarily small for all values of the domain of the functions by choosing the nth term sufficiently far along in the series

Taken from Mr. Webster

http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/uniform








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  • fortyninereasons gold member
    September 20, 2008

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    Your Acrostic is great.
    Thank you so much for entering
    Juls


  • secberm
    September 20, 2008
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    Love you, sis.


  • arafura gold member
    September 20, 2008
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    Clever write and beautifully expressed!


  • Jalalbad gold member
    September 20, 2008

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    Wise woman this is a great write as all your writes are. I like your new photo
    Good luck in contest.


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    September 20, 2008

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    I love the line~ Nature rests its head upon unflinching shoulders...for our Mother is a perfect uniform niaish dear one for the beautiful words and much luck in the contest


  • princessleejwctlvr2
    September 20, 2008

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    I REALLY LIKE THIS!!! VERY VERY GOOD!!!! YOU DID AN EXCELLENT EXCELLENT JOB WRITING THIS!!! All your words fit so perfectly!!!! LOVELY JOB!!!! I LOVE IT!!!


  • Cannonsfire
    September 20, 2008

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    Loved this acrostic and the word you got as well, told with pride here. One thing 'unflenching'....unflinching??
    Great word and brilliant take on it C

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