~~~ remember ~~~
even at midnight
the stars are shining brightly
Author notes
"And at midnight Paul and Silas prayed, and sang praises unto God: and the prisoners heard them. And suddenly there was a great earthquake, so that the foundations of the prison were shaken: and immediately all the doors were opened, and every one's bands were loosed.
~ Acts16:25-26
God works in and through the "suddenleys" and I believe we are going to see things "suddenly" lighten up.
A pixiku is a short form of poetry created by AllPoetry's Sea Angel. She defines it as -
"Pixiku is THREE line poetry
(Wild child of Haiku and Senryu).
PIXIKUS(ues) have no syllable count. Capital letters okay."
In a list
- The Secret Of The Lord group list • next in list
A contest entry
- 5 Lines or Less...ends in 1 hour!! Give me Your Best!! by Timeless Wisdom.
525 points, ended November 15, 2008, 18 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Hoodwinked!
This is a rich piece, full of hope and imagery.
The background suits it perfectly, congratulations on the trophy.
Sorry that I am late with the hoodwink!
Shari
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SImply beautiful and congratulations
on you silver trophy! Keep it up and
thanks for sharing this here.
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Congratulations! You are a finalist in the contest!
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I didnt even make it as a finalist...can i go die now? im so pissed and im tired of entering contests and getting turned down REPEATEDLY.
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Don't get discouraged. Just keep writing and listening to what people say about your work. Writing is life.
Here is a contest I started today. I invite you to enter!
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2427431
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Why bother...I've been writing since i was 6 and im obviously not improving AT ALL!
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Wonderful! I will have to remember this quote next time I am feeling down. Thanks for your entry
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Thanks so much for the encouragement!
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Also, mind you,
At arid sterile noon,
though hidden, stars still shine!
More, please! Love the pixiku!
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Ahhhhh .... perfect add-on!
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A very nicely crafted pixiku. Very poignant as well. Thank you for entering the contest. Great work.
Sam
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Awesome!
As usual, Sis, you are the master of poetry's shortest form. I love the significant note you added about Paul and Silas: God's miracles are awesome. And, as usual, this is a gold winner.
Much love and hugs, SisBon
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Thank you Sis. I sure do miss you!
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Perfection
So Simple ! But it holds allot of truth! I actually go outside around 10ish at night..sit on my trampoline an do devotion! I love it!
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Thank you Josh!
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Great!
Can you just imagine the awe this experience must have brought to the observers! Wonderful write & Scripture quote to elucidate! This is perfection. Good Contest entry! You'll do well. PS: love that pix. I'm a big fan of SpaceScapes of His Creation in the heavens!
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Thank you so much kind friend!
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Humm..very beautiful depiction of the thought....I love it..well done..and thanks for sharing it...my friend..
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Thank you so much kind friend!
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this is exquisite. it is so simple, yet so meaningful and deep. i like the fact that you have included the extract in your author's notes, it adds additional meaning to the poem.
thanks so much for sharing this, I really really enjoyed it
- Katie
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Thank you so much Katie!
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very beautiful and very profound. it goes with the scriptures you used very well. thank you for sharing your wonderful talent with us. keep writing! God bless you always
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Thank you so much kind friend!
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Beautiful and encouraging!
Amber
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Thank you!
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I love this
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Thank you!
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This was beautiful.
"And he calls them all, even by name"
Bell,
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AMEN! and thank you...
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really written beautifully and shortly with the story
wish you the best with the contest and I believe the stars are always here to guide us when we are mostly lost and a way to listen closely to our prayers that we send above -
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Thank you!
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