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Grandfather (Haiku)

A story he told
Wringing willowy old hands
Oh grandfather, goodbye.

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I wrote this after my granfather passed away. It's just one of the poems I wrote about him, I wish him luck, where ever he may be.

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  • Samplette gold member
    October 4, 2008

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    I know I commented on this. A lovely way to remember your grandfather. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam


  • Frogzter gold member
    September 24, 2008

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    Oh this reminded me of my own grandfather who passed many years ago. He always had a story and a smile for me. I loved every minute spent with him.

    Great Haiku!