Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Loved

Loved

sun wraps around me
with warmth, it clings to my skin
I think of who loves me, and I smile.

I smile for those who care
the friends I have that think of me,
and I smile

Warmth fills from my feet to the top
filling each part of me, overflowing
and I love it. I love them.

I love all of them.

peelingsunburn Jan '04

Author notes


Written January 22nd, 2004

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • peelingsunburn
    March 23, 2004
    Edit | Reply
    HUGGGGGGGGGGGGGG I really do apprecaite this msg a lot. IT meakes it even more special becausse it's from you and I know you know me well. HUGSSSSS thankyou soo much. :-D It was fun to write. :-D love peelingsunburn


  • symitar Moderators member
    January 24, 2004
    Edit | Reply
    So nice to see such a loving work from you. YOu are indeed loved, and by many, including me. I wish you all the happiness in the world, we all have our ups and downs, but nice to see you on the upswing! Wonderful poem from a wonderful friend.

    ~becky