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death embrace

smoker puffs
enjoys life diminish
blissfully

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  • J aime Coudre silver member
    September 22, 2008

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    Been there done that...no more! But what's a person to do...problem is life does not always dimish blissfully...great title for the haiku..goodluck


  • Yemassee gold member
    September 20, 2008

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    Ah, more ironic than funny, more satirical than humor. It's a good dilemma, and would make an interesting debate, what matters more..quality versus quantity...for smokers that might be a legitimate discussion.

    On one side, is living a longer, more healthy life, but on the others it's enjoying life the way you want while you are here...I'm not sure on which side I fall.


  • catz Moderators member
    September 20, 2008

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    Did you ever really watch a group of smokers standing outside of a business because they aren't allowed to smoke inside?? It's both sad and interesting.

    Your haiku points out the falacy of the 'pleasure' of smoking.

    Good luck in the contest
    Dee


  • plainoljoe
    September 20, 2008
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    yep, that's the way we smokers live to die;
    blissfully in the company of peers, lol

    Joe