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Jewels of the Sky

It dribbles,
it dots the earth.
Sparkling diamonds of the sky.
Kissing life's toils away,
it hopes to bring
an image used only
in fairy tales,
that wishes
and sees the
dancing dewdrops
boucing along the eves,
diving over you.

Rain comes and
rain goes,
but when it leaves,
it has left behind a shower of
tripping
skipping
jewels.
Water set in gold encases,
cut glass is dull thinking.
Water jewels spatter
sunshine dust all
over you.
Jewels of the sky.

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  • luv2dream gold member
    September 20, 2008
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    love the visuals..can feel the rain and see the images..